Friday, May 15, 2009

Destiny

       In Dreams caring
walking ominously

southward
in existential hopes

Oblivious future
pressing
vice| |grip

Breakdown almost
i n s t a n t a n e o u s

Endless struggle
perseverance
nonchalance

2 comments:

Jeff Brennan said...

I think I fixed it.

You needed the "pre" HTML tags.

J.Q. said...

Thanks Jeff,
Yeah I was reading that post, but I'm not very well versed at any html code whatsoever.